Screen Legibility Repair Lab

What specific issues made the original typography hard to read?
Most of the text seemed a bit cluttered, some spots are close to other pieces of text.
What changes did you make to improve legibility?
I cut the text out and figured out where to place them at firs,t and then I would glue the pieces together on th.eir destinated spots
How did spacing, line breaks, or hierarchy affect readability?
Some pieces of text look fine the way they are, and others could also be placed or moved a bit.
How does this activity connect to the idea that typography should solve problems?

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